unfinished product...

i wrote this poem a few months back.. i never finished it... i wasn't pleased with it...
what do u think??


i guess i'm a romantic
but what is romance
but sumthing i seen on a movie?

cause i got a LOVE JONES
that just won't go away.
i try to hide it
but it comes back
BEFORE SUNSET.
and i
CAN'T HARDLY WAIT
to hear you say sweet
lyrics from your
BEAUTIFUL MIND.

and baby ever since you left
my REALITY BITES.
so i'm kinda
WAITING TO EXHALE
hoping deep down
that you'll
RETURN TO ME.
they keep saying i
should give this up...

but they
NEVER BEEN KISSED
by you.
and people SAY ANYTHING
they want to me
i know it's cause
they don't know how a
LOVE JONES
can be

like...WHILE YOU WERE SLEEPING
i was dreaming about you
and there was that day
u took my breath away...

but i'm STILL BREATHING
and with every breath
i breathe hope
of a TRUE LOVE.