unfinished product

i wrote this poem a few months back.. i never finished it... i wasn't pleased with it... what do u think?? (sometimes unfinished is best..i dunno)

i guess i'm a romantic
but what is romance
but sumthing i seen on a movie?

cause i got a LOVE JONES
that just won't go away
and tho i try to hide it
it's back BEFORE SUNSET.

and i CAN'T HARDLY WAIT
to hear the sweet lyrics
from your BEAUTIFUL MIND.
and baby ever since you left
my REALITY BITES.

so i'm kinda
WAITING TO EXHALE
hoping deep down
that you'll RETURN TO ME.

they keep saying i should give this up...
but they NEVER BEEN KISSED by you.
and people can SAY ANYTHING they want to

i know it's cause they don't know
how a LOVE JONES can be, like...
WHILE YOU WERE SLEEPING
i was dreaming about you

and there was that day u took my breath away...
but i'm STILL BREATHING
and with every breath i breathe hope
of our TRUE LOVE come to....