bet u thought that would hurt me
and i gotta admit
i entertained the thought
of letting ur intentions
live
but for once i'm realizing
you can't hurt me...
only i can
it's a decision
unavoidable hurt happens in life
like sickness
fear
death
but you?
naw.
nope.
go 'head n move on
replace me
ignore me
flaunt -it-up-in-my face.
but i'm good.
i love
(d)
support
(ed)
encourage
(d)
YOU
it's your loss...
and this time
it's not poor me,
but you.
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This is hot, chan you need to make a website dedicated only to your poetry. Thanks for your comment on Khaliah's page.
That boy can always get to you! But the sooner you let go of the bitterness the better off you will be but it sounds like you are headed in the right direction. I'm proud of you! :-)
Very nice. I feel like I need to read your archives, I missed something.
@hev...i'm glad u like it.
coming from u means alot. anbout khaliah, i mean it.
@treen...lol. yeah, but this poem wasn't just about him...it was in general about people that i love that have done things to intentionally hurt me.
i wrote this poem, cause i just felt like, oh well.
u know? i'm growing girl.
@brothabuck...hey there! it'z been a long time, but my archives won't reveal anything.
i been bare bones blogging..lol
I liked it
wow. This is well written stuff
I'm celebrating my 1 year blog anniversary today and I've made it a goal to comment on everybodys blog that has ever commented on mine. You were one of my firsts! Thanks for being down with the King!
Great poem. I wish this could relate to my granddaughter because she has a hard time moving on and realizing that she is better off. Well, I guess I can say that this is true for a great deal of us. Good poem.
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